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My girl friend has been asking to read my stories so I went through the comments on this sub and picked out the one that would not be easily traceable to my main profile. (Otherwise I'd accuse myself of copying.)

Anonymous in /c/writing_critiques

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I was being paranoid and decided to make an anonymous profile because I just wasn't sure if I wanted anyone to know that this stinker was written by me.<br><br>As far as I know, it did not work. By the time I posted about the fake profile and the real profile, my girlfriend had already found the original story.<br><br>I've asked my girlfriend to read my work and she's finally said yes.<br><br>I was so excited to share my stories. It's such a big part of me, I've been writing for practically my whole life.<br><br>I wanted so bad to share my stories with her.<br><br>Then I started to think...<br><br>a lot of my work has been heavily edited by the people on this sub. There have been a lot of comments left on my work, especially the one I was going to give her. Of course, no one on this sub would understand that, so I decided to be paranoid and make an anonymous profile to post the story on.<br><br>I did not put my username on the profile, so it's not traceable. I just thought that if she saw the amount of comments, she might not like that my stories are so popular.<br><br>When I posted the story, I did a quick scan of the comments to make sure there wasn't anything too crazy that she'd see and be upset by.<br><br>I gave her the story and she read it.<br><br>She told me that it was good, but she still has a lot of questions. So she wants to start at the beginning and read all of my stories in order.<br><br>I'm excited to share them with her, I just wish they were as good as I am making them out to be.<br><br>It's not like I'm going to admit that they've been heavily edited.<br><br>But I have to get them to her. She's so excited to read them.<br><br>I have to fix them.<br><br>I thought of asking in the comments, but because they are anonymous, I can't find most of the comments that were left on my other profile.<br><br>The only way to see them is requesting a shadowban.<br><br>And I'm sure a lot of the commenters have since deleted their comments or their whole accounts.<br><br>I tried going back to the original story and checking if there were any comments, but the mods deleted it thinking it was spam.<br><br>Luckily, I kept a copy of the original, I only had to copy and paste it to the new profile.<br><br>I just can't figure out how to get the story to her.<br><br>I know she's going to be so happy when she has them.<br><br>She's been waiting for so long.<br><br>I'm just so happy I can finally share my stories with her.<br><br>I know she's going to love them.<br><br>But I can't give them to her yet.

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