8th Grade English

The last time I had an English assignment, it went very poorly. I only got 28/100, and the lone comment from the teacher was:<br><br>"I can't even begin to tell you everything that's wrong with this. Just please do better next time."<br><br>Okay. I'll try to do better this time. <br><br>What if Jack had never met Rose?<br><br>**My Assignment**<br><br>I think if Jack had never met Rose he would of had more fun on the boat. He wouldn't have been guilty of killing her and he wouldn't have died in the ocean either. He would have lived. <br><br>This makes me very sad because he was a nice guy. He was very funny too. I would have never got off the ship. I would have died with Jack.<br><br>Sincerely, <br>Bethany Smith.