Feedback Friday! (Who did we miss on NaNo feedback?)

Hey all! It's been a while since we had a general "Feedback Friday" and we figured it's high time. Last time we had one of these, we got a lot of great submissions and some excellent stories. We also saw a lot of sad posts about how people didn't get any feedback and we haven't really done a proper anonymous post thread since.<br><br>Since we didn't do an official "Feedback Friday" for this year's NaNo, and given that we don't want newer members feeling left out, we're going to start fresh. This thread is an anonymous post thread; everyone is anonymous and there is no karma whoring to be had. So go ahead, post whatever you want (within the scope of the sub, naturally), and ask for specific feedback. You can also list things you specifically do not want feedback on if you prefer.<br><br>Please remember to give feedback to other writers in return. We all get busy and sometimes we just run out of steam, but do your best to pay it forward. We could always use more comments around here.<br><br>We'll see you next week with our regularly scheduled programming.<br><br>Edit: 1 hour and 600 comments later, wow! You guys are great. Welcome and thank you for the gold! It's going straight to paying to keep the chamber alive.<br><br>>Edit 2: 1300 comments now? Yeah, okay! I'll admit it; I'm a little surprised. I just want to reiterate that this thread is kind of an experiment, so we may or may not run it again. We're working hard to respond to as many comments as we can, but please don't be surprised if you don't get feedback from an official mod account. 1300 comments is a little overwhelming.