My wife, whose mother tongue is not English, is trying to write funny, engaging captions for her Instagram posts. Here’s one she wrote using ChatGPT as a reference. Would you take a look and see if you had any suggestions?

The place where I spent my leisurely childhood days. <br><br>I saw the tree where I had so many holes to hide my secrets. (I am still trying to find some of them.) <br><br>I saw the pit in the ground where my brother and I shared our sadness after we were scolded or cried. <br><br>I remembered the spot where I cried after getting a whack from my brother. <br><br>I remembered the spot where I whacked my brother and then cried after catching whacks from my mom. <br><br>I saw the spot where I stepped on a broken bottle and got stitches. <br><br>I saw the spot where I hurled myself against the wall in an attempt to fly like a superman then cried in pain.<br><br>I cried after seeing the spot where I was nearly killed by a soccer ball.<br><br>And I cried again after seeing the spot where I fought against a pair of brothers, one of whom was a future Korean UFC champion, and lost. <br><br>After all that, I realized… why did I not learn to avoid all the dangers in my life?