critique my entry for a flash fiction contest

so this was the prompt: <br><br>"The space station was empty. Except, of course, for 8 year old Timmy."<br><br>and this was my entry:<br><br>"It was scary. Mom said that the stars were what happened when angels died and their spirits had to go home. I didn’t want to go home. I wanted to be with my mommy and daddy. They put me in a small bubble and told me to go outside. They said there was a bad monster in the ship and that I had to go catch it before it got us. I didn’t want to. But they said I had to." <br><br>so what do you think?