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What if people didn’t die, but their bodies just rotted while their consciousness continued to roam?

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The flickering fluorescent lights hummed overhead, bathing the dimly lit hospital room in an eerie, yellowish hue. The smell of disinfectant wafted through the air, but beneath it all, a hint of death lingered. It was a strange, almost inexplicable scent that felt both familiar and foreboding.<br><br>The room was small, with a single bed positioned in the center. The bed was covered in crisp, white sheets and adorned with a patchwork quilt. Three chairs were arranged in the corner, two of which were occupied by loved ones.<br><br>One, an elderly woman with short, curly brown hair and soft green eyes, clutched a rosary between fragile fingers. Her wrinkled hands grasped the beads for comfort, a sign of her fear as much as a show of faith. The other, a middle-aged man with a shaggy beard and tanned skin, rubbed his eyes. They were bloodshot and red, the result of too much weeping.<br><br>I turned away and found myself staring at the woman lying in the bed. Her face was stretched, pulled tight like a balloon. She must have been a pretty lady once. Now, her skin was deathly white, with bright red blisters across her nose and cheeks. Her hair was nothing more than a disheveled mess.<br><br>She looked at me and smiled, her lips splitting beneath the effort. A trickle of blood slid down her cheek. I stared.<br><br>“Hello?” the man asked. “Can I talk to you for a minute?”<br><br>“Sure.”<br><br>I turned away and walked toward the door, mildly happy to leave the room and its awful stench behind. The man followed, his footsteps echoing in the silence.<br><br>“Ah,” he said, “sorry, my name is Chris.”<br><br>“Matty.”<br><br>“And you are…?” he asked, tilting his head.<br><br>“I’m…” I shrugged. “I don’t know. I don’t remember my life.”<br><br>“Did you see her?”<br><br>“See who?”<br><br>“The woman in the bed.”<br><br>I shrugged again. “She’s dead but she’s not dead.”<br><br>“What?”<br><br>“She’s not in her body anymore,” I continued, “but her consciousness lingers.”<br><br>“I know,” Chris said, “I know. But you’re not supposed to see it.”<br><br>“See what?”<br><br>“When a person dies, their body rots, but their spirit doesn’t leave the world. It just…just goes away, somewhere else.”<br><br>I shook my head. “I love to listen, but someone else is talking.”<br><br>“What?”<br><br>“It’s a quote,” I said, “I think. I’m not sure. I don’t really know what it means.”<br><br>Chris stared at me a moment before asking, “Where are you from?”<br><br>I shrugged. “I was in the hospital, a lot like this one. I watched as a lady died, and her spirit left her body. Now I just wander.”<br><br>“Why?”<br><br>“I don’t know,” I answered. “I don’t know anything about myself. I don’t know how old I was when I died. I don’t know my name. Sometimes I wonder if I was really alive.”<br><br>Chris nodded. “Well, my mother is gone. Her name was Sherri. She was a pretty lady once. I think she looks prettier now, in death.”<br><br>I touched his shoulder. “I’m sorry.”<br><br>“Can you see her now?”<br><br>“Yes.”<br><br>He turned and walked back into the room. I followed. The woman was watching me, a smile on her face. Her eyes seemed to follow me, watching me as I walked in.<br><br>“Matty,” she said. “Chris.”<br><br>I nodded, and the old lady waved. “Sherri?”<br><br>“Yes?”<br><br>“You come back to us.”<br><br>She nodded. “In time,” she said. “But not now.”<br><br>The man shook his head. “I will see you soon. Be good. Watch over yourself.”<br><br>“I will. I am.”<br><br>I watched as the woman died. The lights flickered briefly, taking on a blue hue. She stepped out of her body, and it fell to the ground, dead. She looked at the body, then she looked at me.<br><br>“Come with me,” she said.<br><br>I nodded my head, then I turned to the man and the woman. “Thank you for your kindness.”<br><br>Then I turned and left with the dead woman, the light in the room fading.

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