Anyone up for a long short story critique?

I have a 22,000 word short story I wrote last month, and I'm looking for a critique. <br><br>I'll send it via Google Drive, and it's fairly long, so if you get a chance to read it, I'd appreciate the feedback. <br><br>Let me know in this thread and I'll send it your way!<br><br>Edit: I've sent it over to folks who have already reached out. If I don't reply relatively soon, it's because I've been overly optimistic about how quickly I can read, critique, and respond. Thanks for the interest!