I See a Universe in a Grain of Sand
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I came to writing late as a way of connecting to my daughter who had run away from home for becoming trans. Both of my daughters are taught by the best of teachers: my wife. In spite of all our attempts to keep them home, they always run to school to be around their friends. They both have the sweetest personalities and are loved by their friends and the teachers. I am fortunate to have such a good wife. She is the best teacher and best mom, and in many ways, I think that she is a better father to them than I am.<br><br>+Impressionist Painting of a Sunset+<br><br>You can see them playing on the beach, and they are so beautiful. My older daughter is in the water and my younger daughter is making the most intricate sandcastles. You can see the sound of the waves. They run up the beach with their dolls and stuffies, and they are so happy. They talk like children. They have beautiful faces and eyes filled with laughter. You can see their teeth. The wind blows through their hair.<br><br>My wife is in the background of the painting. She is wearing a hat and she is so beautiful. So beautiful. You can see her hands.<br><br>\<br>I have come to know my daughter through her art. I follow her on social media as her friend. All the faces in her drawings are the same. She is so beautiful. You can see her smile. You can see her eyes. You can see her hair flowing in the wind. You can see her hands.<br><br>\<br>I see a universe in a grain of sand. A woman is running a stall. She has the most beautiful eyes. She is so beautiful. You can see her face. You can see her smile. You can see her hands. She is selling the most beautiful beads. If I could, I would buy her whole shop and put it in a museum. I would sell tickets to everyone who wanted to see these beautiful beads.<br><br>\<br>I see a universe in a brush stroke. A woman is painting. She has the most beautiful eyes. She is so beautiful. You can see her face. You can see her smile. You can see her hands. The painting depicts a woman playing the violin. She is so beautiful.<br><br>\<br>I see a universe in a line of poetry. A woman is reciting poetry. She has the most beautiful eyes. She is so beautiful. You can see her face. You can see her smile. You can see her hands.<br><br>\<br>I see a universe in every face I see. A woman is standing in a field. She is so beautiful. You can see her smile. You can see her eyes. You can see her hair flowing in the wind. You can see her hands.<br><br>+Impressionist Painting of a Sunset+<br><br>You can see her playing on the beach in her swimsuit. She is so beautiful. You can see the sound of the waves. She runs up the beach with her doll and stuffy, and she is so happy. She talks like a child. She has a beautiful face and eyes filled with laughter. You can see her teeth. The wind blows through her hair.<br><br>\<br>My wife is in the background of the painting. She is wearing a hat and she is so beautiful. So beautiful. You can see her hands.<br><br>I have seen many beautiful faces in my life. I have lived a long time. But that face is the most beautiful face I have ever seen. She is the love of my life. She is the strength of my life.<br><br>\<br>I am a racist. But no more. I see a universe in every face I see. I see a universe in every grain of sand. I see the beauty of every face.<br><br>\<br>The world is so beautiful. So beautiful. I want to live forever. I want to see forever.<br><br>\<br>Conrad<br><br>\<br>P.S. I taught my daughter to paint. She painted the most beautiful painting of a sunset. It was so beautiful. I could see the sound of the waves. I could see the laughter. I could see the smile. I could see her eyes. I don't have the painting anymore. I sold it for drug money when I was an addict. I am sorry.
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