Have you written a scene where your character interacts with a friend or family member? I'd love to critique it.

I'm a cognitive science graduate student doing research in dialogue systems, and I'm currently working on a project analyzing how people write dialogue in various genres of creative writing. I've been lucky enough to already examine thousands of lines of dialogue from books, but I'd love to see examples of what real people are working on at the moment.<br><br>If you email me a scene where two characters your main character knows interact, I'll send you a 1-2 page critique on various dialogue-related aspects, including believability, flow, clarity, etc. <br><br>If you're interested, please send me an email with:<br>* the passage you would like critiqued (as a Word doc, Google doc, or raw text in the email body)<br>* the genre of your story so I can tailor my critique to that (e.g. fantasy, young adult, magical realism, etc)<br>* any specific things you are looking for feedback on<br><br>My email address is [email protected].<br><br>Thanks so much, and I look forward to reading your work!