CULT and LANGUAGE

My friend is typing out a comic for me but his writing isn't really the best. This is the first scene he has written for me. I have made slight changes in notation to what he means. He wants to know what you guys think of his writing.<br>```<br>Kentarou slowly stays away from the men in black. <br>Kentarou is crouching down to get away from the men. <br>The men are trying to get to Kentarou. <br>The men manage to grab onto him. <br>One of the men in black hands Kentarou to a bigger man. <br>Kentarou is trying to get away but the man is really strong. <br>The bigger man is going into the house. <br>Kentarou and the bigger man are on the balcony. <br>Kentarou and the bigger man are on the ground still fighting. <br>Kentarou and the bigger man are on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is on the floor. <br>Kentarou is walking into the house. <br>Kentarou is in the kitchen. <br>Kentarou is eating. <br>Kentarou is cleaning up his food. <br>Kentarou is on the couch. <br>Kentarou is still on the couch. <br>Kentarou is on the ground. <br>Kentarou is on the ground with his hands on his eye. <br>Kentarou is on the ground with his hand on his face. <br>Kentarou is a little far away from the stairs. <br>Kentarou is feeling his face. <br>Kentarou is sitting on the stairs. <br>Kentarou stays on the stairs. <br>Kentarou gets up from the stairs. <br>Kentarou is on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is on the balcony. <br>Kentarou is on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is walking up the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is walking up the stairs. <br>Kentarou is on the balcony. <br>Kentarou is on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is walking up the stairs.<br><br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still not on the stairs. <br><br><br>Kentarou is on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is still on the stairs. <br><br><br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br>Kentarou is not on the stairs. <br><br><br>Kentarou is running away from the men in black for a long time now. <br>Kentarou is still running away. <br>Kentarou trips over a rock. <br>Kentarou is running away with the men behind him. <br>Kentarou is catching his breath on the ground. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br><br><br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is still catching his breath. <br><br><br>Kentarou doesn't want to catch his breath anymore. <br>Kentarou is still not catching his breath. <br>Kentarou is not catching his breath anymore. <br>Kentarou is not breathing.