Poem called A Shadow ( I hope it’s acceptable to post poems)
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I know what it is, to find all Only shadows. <br><br><br>Shadows of everything and everyone. <br><br><br>In my head.<br><br><br>At night I see the ghost of her leaving, racing <br>away in her Black Dress. <br><br><br>You can’t see Her, when you’re in My Head. <br><br><br>You have no Idea, what happens when I’m surrounded <br>By all the things that You love. <br><br><br>Always, Always, you have to sleep. <br><br><br>You don’t know that she will eavesdrop, <br>That she will hear us talking, that she will snipe, <br>snipe, snipe and steal, drink, drink, drink, and eat, <br>She will eat you alive. <br><br><br>That’s why you have to sleep at night. <br><br><br>In the day, there’s no problems. <br><br><br>No one to set me free from; No One to keep a secret from. <br><br><br>I live in My Head. <br><br><br>You can’t see Her, when you’re in My head.<br><br><br>I know what it is, to find all Only shadows.<br><br><br>Shadows of everything and everyone.<br><br><br>In My Head. <br><br><br>You can’t see Her, when you’re in My Head. <br><br><br>I hope it’s ok, it’s quite short. <br><br><br>Thank you for helping me.
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