Post your poetry(so I can critique it)

Post your poetry and I will critique it.<br><br>Please only post once per thread. I also will only critique one piece of poetry per post, so if you have posted a collection of poems, I will only critique one of them. You can make another post on the same thread if you would like, or you could make a separate thread for each piece of work you need critiqued.<br><br>Thank you, and I hope your writing is helpful for you.