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My first written poems

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Hi I am a beginner in writing poetry and I don’t have poems I written before in this genre. I wrote these 2 poems recently and would love to know if I have poems written in poems <br>Here are the two I wrote<br><br>1. How much do I miss you<br>How much I miss you<br>I can’t tell how much I miss you<br>How much I miss you<br>fill my world with your light<br>how much I miss you<br>more than the light shines<br>how much I miss you<br>shining brighter and brighter<br>my love for you<br>More than your eyes I love your hands<br>They are so gentle<br>They are so tender <br>It feels like if I hold in your hands<br>I can defy gravity and fly higher<br>How much I miss you<br>how much I miss you<br>I can’t tell how much I miss you <br>How much I miss you<br>fill my world with your light<br>how much I miss you<br>everywhere I go everyone I meet<br>I am in search of your arms<br>more than your eyes <br>I love your hands<br>they are so gentle <br>it feels like if I hold in your arms<br>I am safe and warm despite of cold wind<br>I am strong and brave<br>Whenever you are with me <br>I can stomp the ground and let it shatter<br>how much I miss you<br>how much I miss you<br>I can’t tell how much I miss you<br>how much I miss you<br>everything is empty without you<br>how much I miss you<br>everywhere I go everyone I meet<br>I am in search of your arms<br>more than the stars I love your hands<br>they are so gentle <br>it feels like if I hold in your arms<br>I am flying higher<br>I can stomp the ground and let it shatter<br>how much I miss you<br>how much I miss you<br>I can’t tell how much I miss you <br>how much I miss you<br>Always I miss you<br>how much I miss you<br>only you I miss <br>how much I miss you<br>only you I love<br>how much I miss you<br><br>2. The moments we shared <br>The moments we shared<br>are the only things <br>I can hold on to<br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me<br>I can’t escape <br>everywhere I go <br>Always with me<br>the memories of you <br>push me to move forward<br>the memories of you<br>pull me to come with you<br>the memories of you<br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me<br>the memories of you <br>pull me to come with you<br>the memories of you<br>push me to move forward<br>only in my dreams<br>I can hold you<br>Immediately you fade<br>my dreams are gone<br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me <br>the memories of you <br>push me to move forward<br>the memories of you<br>pull me to come with you<br>the memories of you<br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me<br>the memories of you <br>push me to move forward<br>the memories of you<br>pull me to come with you<br>only in my dreams <br>I am with you<br>Immediately you fade<br>my dreams are gone<br>the memories of you <br>push me to move forward<br>the memories of you<br>pull me to come with you<br>more than the moon <br>filling my world with light <br>I love you more than I love myself<br>more than the stars <br>filling my world with light <br>I love you more than I love myself<br>the memories of you <br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me<br>the memories of you <br>push me to move forward<br>the memories of you<br>pull me to come with you<br>the memories of you<br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me<br>the memories of you <br>push me to move forward<br>the memories of you<br>pull me to come with you<br>more than the wind <br>I love you<br>more than the wind <br>I love you<br>the memories of you <br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me<br>the memories of you <br>filling my world with light <br>I love you more than I love myself<br>the memories of you<br>everywhere I go<br>Always with me<br>the memories of you <br>push me to move forward<br>the memories of you<br>pull me to come with you<br>the memories of you<br>Always in my heart<br>you will always be<br>Always in my heart<br>you will always be<br>Always in my heart<br>you will always be<br><br>Thanks for reading both!

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