Critique my verse

I love you more with every coming day,<br>Though the amount that I love you now is so hard to convey,<br>It's like trying to count the grains of sand in the sea,<br>Or the number of times my heart beats just for you and me,<br>But I'll love you forever, and maybe even more,<br>Long after the sea has lost its waves, and my heart has lost its core,<br>My heart may stop beating, and my blood may cease to flow,<br>But my love for you my darling will forever grow.