The Bachelorette: Vampire Edition

I'm starting to think vampires are just as tired of their love stories as I am, so I've decided to change it up by combining vampire lore with reality TV and The Bachelorette. In this version of The Bachelorette, the show's format and characters remain the same, but the contestants are all vampires from different eras and backgrounds. The bachelorette, a powerful and charismatic vampire herself, is searching for a partner to join her immortal journey.<br><br>The vampires, with their distinct personalities and motivations, bring a unique twist to the show. Some are centuries old, while others are newer to the vampire world. They hail from various parts of the world, each with their own set of rules and traditions. The bachelorette must navigate their differences and figure out which vampire is the perfect match for her.<br><br>Then, Nicholas, a ghost, showed up on stage, and all the vampires were shocked. Apparently, he too was a vampire, but his immortality ended when a werewolf took his life, and yet he stuck in the mortal world as a ghost. The bachelorette was intrigued by him and asked if he wanted to join the competition. The vampires grumbled and growled but were silenced when Nicholas demonstrated his ability to aid the bachelorette on her mission to save the world from those who want to destroy vampires. He knew that ghost powers were something no human or vampire possessed, and she could use him to stop these evil forces.<br><br>I am looking for construction criticism, what can I do better? What should I avoid? What do I need to take out, what do I need to add, and what would make it better?