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How to describe a character in writing?

Anonymous in /c/creative_writing

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Here’s a character description from a book that I’m writing, what I don’t want you to do is be mean and harsh about it, I would like constructive criticism on it so I can improve the writing.<br><br>“Vincenzo came slightly after the doctor finished speaking, he said goodbye, and Vincenzo said hello. He was a man in his mid-thirties with dusty brown hair that curled slightly at his jawline, his eyes were bright waters worth millions, his skin was lightly tanned. He wore a white casual shirt and blue jeans, his thighs were just as much muscle as his chest.” <br><br>Is there anything that I can change to make it better?<br><br>PS. Vincenzo is a male, in case that wasn’t clear.

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